No way, I thought it was great! But then again, I’m white — what do I know? Oh yeah, EVERYTHING!
Now THAT was over the top, and I apologize preemptively.
I personally think you nailed it. Especially because people like Rick Santorum probably believe black people DO get reparations checks, and then gamble them away, spend them on crack, etc. — see every fucked up stereotype from the “Caddy-driving welfare queen” Reagan years. And before that. And now.